The Race

In the novel 'Afternoons With Mister D', a story is told in the chapter titled 'Cross-Country'.
The words below seek to illustrate the memory shared by Mister D, with his friend Charlee Parker.
Enjoy!


They were the two best.  As opposing coaches described, they could run like the breath of a cyclone.  Jimmy Klein was in his first year of high school.  His closest rival was in his second.  They were both lean and quick.  Speed and endurance were the only ways to compete in their chosen sport.

The trail for today’s meet had a rugged feel from the start.  The bus ride had been long and rough to the northeast corner of the state.  Traffic on the highway had caused the visiting team to be tardy, adding to the freshman’s anxiety.  There’d been some rain the night before.  The wooded portion of the course might still be wet in spots.

These things have a way of totaling up.

“Be aware of roots,” Coach Preston had said, when they first arrived. “Roots can be more dangerous than stones.  Trust me, you’ll see the stones.  Roots, on the other hand can be deceptive.  A rolled ankle can ruin your season.”

They were a few weeks into the cross country season.  Five dual races in the books.  Jimmy finished first in each.  His best friend Nick was second.  Two freshmen leading a high school team, full of first and second year runners, to glory.

The up state rivals had a runner who was Jimmy’s equal.  He was a sophomore with a year’s experience under his belt.  The trail was his school’s home turf.  Jimmy had never seen the path slicing through the woods, until today, during the walk-through.

The sophomore’s name was Ralph.  He seemed to size up Jimmy during warmups.  Ralph was taller, by an inch or two, and had stronger looking legs.  It was said that Ralph had torn up the opposition with a magnificent kick at the end of his previous races.  Coach Preston tried to make Jimmy care.  To Jimmy it was just another race, and definitely not the most important one he would ever run.

“You ready,” Nick said, before adding, with a light hearted chuckle. “I’m getting tired of second place.  Today I’m feeling that third might be in my grasp.”

“He is good,” Jimmy replied. “We just run.  Who knows, maybe today is your day to cross the finish line before anyone else, including me.”

“I’ll make sure to keep that in mind when I fall fifty yards behind you.”

They started the race at the retort of the gun.  The race would be three point one miles.  Two meets ago Jimmy set a new school record.  Coach Preston saw a championship for his team on the horizon, and individual awards for his prized freshman runner.

None of that mattered, once the gun fired.

They ran across an open field, twenty-two boys, wearing the uniforms of the two schools competing.  After a hundred yards the runners would funnel into a trail that sliced through a wooded section, dominated by the hazards of Mother Nature.

Jimmy, Ralph and Nick separated from the pack not long after entering woods.  The next two miles would twist, turn and climb.  Chipmunks and squirrels would scamper away as the heavy breathing two legged monsters gave their best for the color they wore.

Nick was falling back, still well ahead of the pack.  Ralph was pushing Jimmy to his limits.  Then it happened.  The one thing Coach Preston had warned his runners about.  Only the errant stride didn’t belong to Jimmy or Nick.  It was Ralph’s misfortune.  The runner for the opposite team went down in a heap.

Jimmy saw the ankle bend in an awkward manner.  He stopped.

“Go on,” he said to Nick, as his friend caught up.

Nick seemed uncertain.  He continued to jog in place as the pack rounded a distant corner.

“Go,” Jimmy insisted. “Today is your day.”

Nick took off, now the premier runner in a race where he should have settled for third.

As the other runners passed Ralph and Jimmy, most glanced and kept running.  A few promised to tell their coach, and send help back.  One stopped.  A small kid from Ralph’s team.  A kid who was destined to finish last.  His name was Gabriel, like the angel.

The three of them sat on a log.  Ralph tested the ankle.  It wasn’t good.

“Probably not broken,” Gabriel said. “A bad sprain though.”

Jimmy got to one side of the root’s victim.  Gabriel got on the other.  They had about a mile to go.

“You didn’t have to stop,” Ralph said as they moved along at a pace that could only be described as haphazard, awkward, and slow. “This was your race to win.”

“Nick was due,” Jimmy said.

“That the kid that was pacing us?” Ralph asked.

“He was trying,” Jimmy kidded.

“Still… Gabriel would have stopped.  Ain’t that right Gabe?”

Gabriel replied to his teammate, “I would have waited with you, back on that log.  I’m sure the Calvary would have returned for us in no time.”

“I did what was right,” Jimmy said, as they neared the open field marking the race’s end.

A few runners were heading back to help.  Nick was among them.  Good thing.  Jimmy and Gabriel were tired.

“Sometimes doing what’s right makes you lose the race,” Ralph commented, just stating the obvious.

“The point is,” Jimmy replied, “not all races have a finish line.”




copyright 2025 - Donald P James Jr

From the Novel; Afternoons With Mister D

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